I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kayelim, thanks for sharing your hobby with us. You've done a good job in giving different reasons for why you like gaming. Remember to add full stops to the end of your sentences. You can also try to use a different sentence starter, such as Ps5 is fun because.....
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Kayelim, thanks for sharing your hobby with us. You've done a good job in giving different reasons for why you like gaming. Remember to add full stops to the end of your sentences. You can also try to use a different sentence starter, such as Ps5 is fun because.....
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