I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Kayelim, Kartter Picker sounds like a very unhygienic child! I'd hate to think what happens to the pile of snot! Can you tell the reader a bit more about why he was suspended? Was there a mischievous adventure that the readers should know?
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Kia Ora Kayelim, Kartter Picker sounds like a very unhygienic child! I'd hate to think what happens to the pile of snot! Can you tell the reader a bit more about why he was suspended? Was there a mischievous adventure that the readers should know?
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